Friday, March 1, 2013

Here's Something for You Nit Pickers

4 comments:

H. Paul Honsinger, Military Science Fiction Author and Retired Attorney said...

I misspelled "quarantine." It has been corrected. I'm going to make a few minor changes based on my gaming out the strategy in Book III. The new map will go up in a few days.

H. Paul Honsinger, Military Science Fiction Author and Retired Attorney said...

Several small changes made over the past few days as we gamed out the events of "Brothers in Valor." We'll post a shot of the adjusted map shortly.

Anonymous said...

Sorta minor nit picking; on your whiteboard, you spell the Vaaach space 'Vaach".

Loved the books, Hurry up on number 3. And i look forward to the next series as well.

I will post a review on Amazon as well.

Whiskey Mike

H. Paul Honsinger, Military Science Fiction Author and Retired Attorney said...

Whiskey--corrected long ago, along with dozens of other changes. Which is why we do this on a white board instead of paper. We spent weeks making adjustments, large and small, then copied it onto tracing paper (that map is tacked to a metal bookshelf with magnets), erased the board, and moved on. Thanks in advance for the review. I'll post the map after I make a few more decisions about the location of some points on it.